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From: BluePossession
, 27 months, post #1 |
I've been a longtime Story reader and longtime lurker of this board
but I think it's time for me to try my hand at writing some TG
possession stories. I feel like new possession stories are at an
all time low and I'm hoping that by trying my best and presenting a
few new ideas that maybe the genre can be revived somewhat. I'd
much rather be a reader than an author so it is my hope that people
might be inspired by my stories whether they're bad or good to also
pick it up and make more content for me to read.
Please respond with whatever constructive criticism you think you
should share. I have thick skin and only want to become better. If
this story is no good let me know what I did wrong. Even if its not
really criticism if you have anything at all to say feel free to.
I'd love to hear from fellow lurkers.
Anyway here's my first shot called: Being Ms. Sanchez - part 1
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UfC44qxF9JKnmA8Q1r794Lmedcqq1Vpw/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=113842942562956861321&rtpof=true&sd=true
Yeah yeah it's kind of a rip off of the Being John Malkovich
possession technique but I think some of the character interactions
are some originality is. Also it's part 1 of 2 but I have an idea
of where it can go from here. Part 2 should also be more explicit
if you think that'll improve the overall story.
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From: guest
, 27 months, post #2 |
while the storyline itself isn't something i care for i can say
that you have an excellent writing style. much better than most net
fiction.
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From: BluePossession
, 27 months, post #3 |
Wow thank you very much guest. I mean I don't think I'm that good
yet tho lol. It's my first story ever. You mind if I ask what you
would have wanted instead? Do you not like possession much and
prefer other types of stories? Or was it not explicit enough? I was
actually going to just about to get to the explicit things but
decided to split it into two stories instead which was possibly a
mistake. Or did I just take too long to get to the actual TG part?
Either way your compliment alone is enough to motivate me to write
at least another story I think lol.
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From: guest (Guest H)
, 27 months, post #4 |
Bluepossesion i have one request that if you can write a story if I
give you a conceptpleaseeeeeeeeeeee.Will you write?????
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From: BluePossession
, 27 months, post #5 |
No, I'm not taking requests yet man. I literally have only written
one story. Not entirely satisfied with it either. If you have a
concept though I encourage you to try writing it yourself and see
how it goes.
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From: guest
, 27 months, post #6 |
>Do you not like possession much and prefer other types of
stories? Or was it not explicit enough?
Oh no, nothing like that. I just don't like Jerry McGuire or school
settings. You didn't do anything wrong, it's just not my cup of
tea. I tend to only read stories where all the main characters are
over 30.
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From: guest
, 27 months, post #7 |
To be perfectly honest, what you wrote is better than 90% of the
stories, interactives, etc. that are written in this genre now. I
know you said you prefer to be a reader, but you have talent.
Hopefully you keep writing so we can all enjoy the quality, which
is excellent even as a relative novice, of your work in the future.
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