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From: guest (Wannabe Writer)
, 5 months, post #1 |
I wrote the following to continue your story, but didn't want to go
any further without your permission. I have ideas of where to take
the story and will give all three of you credit of course. Tell me
what you think. No infringement or insult is intended.
Body Switched Book 3: Forgetting you were once someone else
"Morning honey".
Richie yawned as he entered the kitchen to find his wife, Jenny
cooking Breakfast.
"You slept in late", Jenny replied as she flipped over the french
toast in the frying pan.
"Well it is a Saturday, dear", Richie said as she came up behind
his gorgeous wife, wrapped his arms around her and kissed her on
the cheek. "You know, you look so beautiful, even without makeup."
Jenny playfully slapped him. "Don't remind me! I have yet to even
take a shower." "Did you see Michael or Jacob on your way down, or
are those two lazy heads still snoring away?"
"I just woke up myself but I did see a flickering of light coming
underneath their door, I suspect they're playing Lego Star Wars
again."
Jennifer sighed exasperatedly, "I don't know what I'm going to do
with those two."
"I know, I know you want a daughter to talk about feminine things
with", Richie said as he rubbed Jennifer's pregnant tummy. "I have
a feeling this one is a girl you have in the oven."
"Any ideas what you'd like to name her?" "What about naming her
after your mother, Stacy? I wish I could've met her. The way you
talk about her, she sounds like she was a wonderful woman. That
drunk driver better not ever get out of prison anytime soon."
"Don't remind me of him please sweetie, I don't want to think of
that murdering drunk on this beautiful Saturday morning."
Richie gave Jennifer another kiss to try to comfort her as tears
leaked out of her eyes.
"Are you still planning on running for school council?" Richie
asked. "You know I make plenty of money for the four, and soon to
be five of us, ya know?"
"I know Mr. Veterinarian, but we need to improve the schools in
this town. I can't teach THREE children you know?"
"Maybe your brother Jason could lend you a hand from time to time,
he replied?"
"Are you kidding me? When he's not busy watching football, or
drinking beer, he's out in his shed playing around with his tools
or trying to be like our father by inventing some sort of new
crap?", sighed, she still had trouble believing that she was once
him. "How did I ever manage?", She thought.
"Well I'll support you no matter what Jenny!, You know how much I
adore you! I'm the luckiest man on the planet."
"And I'm the luckiest woman on the planet!" Jenny responded, before
thinking "And luckiest former boy on the Earth to get inherit this
body, and to marry the biggest hunk every to pitch a baseball!"
"What are we going to do about Michael?" Richie suddenly
questioned.
What do you mean Richie?" Jennifer asked, feeling puzzled.
"You know... about him liking other boys? Did something go wrong
when he and his niece switched back?" "I mean when you spent that
week as your brother did you start to like other girls, when you
were him?"
___________________________________________
To be continued... maybe?
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From: guest
, 5 months, post #2 |
I hope that they give permission. It's such a good story and I'd
love to hear you expand on it.
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From: guest
, 4 months, post #3 |
Would like to see more of this yes :)
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