Metamorphose.org
A Catalog of Transformations, Plus Reviews and Alerts
Request an Account
age
animal
female
furry
gender
inanimate
male
mythical
size
were
MSG Board
7   Any Female Head on M
529   Indian show help (2)
7   Animal tfs in Kindle
6   Old anime 80s/90s wh
14   Looking for Caps fro
475   Multiple bodies [one
1   Korean drama Tale of
I made some writing.com chapters! Rate them?
From: guest (Mike) , 1 months, post #1
I've been using writing.com for years of reading possession/expansion based stories (which is damn near unusable). I was unable to change anything because the process of making on a account is so buggy. Now though, I finally got into the system and have started making chapters.

Now I'm not a gold star writer but I think I'm getting a bit better each time. I try to make the chapters long to screw the endless "pay for membership" messages you get and have to refresh bomb them 20+times to continue.

My chapters start at the links below

The Body Possession Powers
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1210573-The-Body-Possession-Powers/action/view/chapter_map/13321212122

Possessed Body Parts
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1932178-Possessed-Body-Parts/action/view/chapter_map/14332

In Control
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1740101-In-Control/map/125

"Kim" in "In Control" looks like this
https://www.hairstyleslife.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/05/Chic-Red-Pixie-Short-Hairstyles-for-Oval-Faces.jpg

And "Veronica" look like this
https://24myfashion.com/2016/wp-content/uploads/2016/03/tight-maxi-dresses-tumblr-2016-2017-3.jpg

Tell me what you think

From: guest (wubbalubbadubdub) , 1 months, post #2
There's some good writing you got, enough to visualize the story scene...

From: guest (wubbalubbadubdub) , 1 months, post #3
If you got the time could you help me continue my chapters in The Transplant?

My chapter started here:
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1974478-The-Transplant/cid/2776526

From: Valkan , 1 months, post #4
If you're looking for honest thoughts, then my main note to the both of you would be to work on your grammar. The grammar and punctuation mistakes take me out of the story. Maybe use something like grammarly before publishing your chapters.

From: guest (Mike) , 1 months, post #5
Yeah... I know, but the pages were so long and the errors fly under the radar when you're two paragraphs down.

I'd correct them, but only the author can edit chapters

From: guest (Mike) , 1 months, post #6
And... Wubba

I'll try, but I prefer building off blank A,B and C choices so I can have more freedom. I'll see what I can do though.

From: guest (wubbalubbadubdub) , 1 months, post #7
Ok cool

From: guest , 1 months, post #8
And, uh... for anyone else commenting.

Can I get in trouble for using pics of people's faces like that? The two girl pics at the bottom of my post?

From: guest (wubbalubbadubdub) , 1 months, post #9
No, no trouble

From: Nptox18 , 1 months, post #10
First of all thanks Mike for posting on my story...

Second, i like your ideas in writing...some ponctuation here and there, and sometimes some phrasing could be improved, but not bad...

Have a nice day and best regards...

PS: If possible always leave two options at the end of each chapter, if anyone would like to continue your previous post but with a different idea...

From: guest (Jayzie) , 1 months, post #11
I despise writing.com. Every time I go on there I get that stupid error message about how it's temporarily unavailable.
But I'm sure your chapters are great. Perhaps I'll see them on another site some day.

From: guest (wubbalubbadubdub) , 1 months, post #12
Anyone here gift me a membership on writing.com, just wanna say thanks.

From: guest (wubbalubbadubdub) , 1 months, post #13
Anyone here gift me a membership on writing.com. Just wanna say thanks.


From: guest (Mike) , 1 months, post #14
Which one was that, post 10?

Add a New Message to This Thread
Nickname:
Captcha
7
8
7
4
To prove you are not a spambot,
enter this number

Posting Guidelines

Primary

  • ANY POST(s) MAY BE REMOVED at the discretion of moderators for violation of this website's guidelines/rules or any law applicable to this website.
  • All discussions must be transformation related OR of interest to the transformation community.
  • Please try to keep posts appropriate for younger teenage eyes to view (Things you'd be comfortable sharing with a 13 year-old).
  • Do not 'attack' other posters. You may attack an individual's comments but not the individual.
  • Be polite, courteous, and respectful. Please keep the conversations civil.
  • While use of an online alias is ok. Do NOT pretend to be another (or registered) user.

Intellectual Property

  • Do not post direct links to complete copyrighted works. Links provided by (or approved by) the copyright holder may be exempt.
  • Links to content hosted on websites that have a clear, and easy to find, process for dealing with infringement(s); and a known reputation for following through with said process, may be allowed.
  • Please read this site's views on copyrighted content on the FAQ page.
  • Do not plagiarize. Credit your sources.

Helpful

  • For posts and material that are not safe for viewing in a workplace or with younger eyes, please mark the thread or post as either, "MATURE CONTENT", "ADULT CONTENT", or "NSFW".
  • Please post clear SPOILER warnings if you intend to give away details that would spoil the story for those who have not yet seen the material, preferably by using the spoiler tags (don't forget to close the spoiler text with the end tag), like so: <spoiler>Text to be "hidden" </spoiler> -- For additional help, please see: HOW TO: Use Spoiler tags message thread.
  • When starting a New Message Thread, please include details about your topic of discussion or request in the Subject field to help draw in readers who are interested and avoid wasting the time of those who are not. Also helpful in searching for the topic/thread later.
  • If you post a link, please provide some detail as to what it is. Identify the material if possible.
  • Please post in English, or include an English translation, when possible.
  • If seeking material / information, include the results of your own efforts so that others can offer better help (and avoid wasting time and effort on redundant searches).
  • When starting a new thread to request material or information, please begin the subject with "REQ:" or "REQUEST".

Etiquette

  • Do not post messages in ALL CAPITAL LETTERS.
  • Do not attack a user for improper spelling and/or grammar. Not all of our community uses English as their native language.
  • Please do not stray (far) from the topic of the original post.
  • If a poster provides their contact information for any reason, do NOT clutter the Message Board by asking them to contact you. They gave out their contact information for a reason.
  • No begging. Ask nicely.
  • Do not feed the trolls and spammers. Please ignore them.
  • Do not keep asking for clips after others have already posted information on where to obtain the material.
  • Please have some patience. Not everyone visits the board daily. Your post may not be seen (by someone with the correct information or idea) for several days or weeks.
  • No bumping. Bumping will be treated as intentional spamming.

Advertising

  • Do not post advertisements.
  • One exception is for products or services that relate to entries on this site. And even then, only post an announcement once. You should add links or content to the appropriate database entries. Do not repeat this information to the message board. Doing so will be considered spamming.

Miscellaneous

  • This list is neither all-inclusive or all-exclusive in nature, and is meant to guide everyone on appropriate content for and conduct on this Message Board.
  • The purpose of this Message Board is to share information about transformation-related content, news, ideas, etc. Also acceptable, are conversations that are of interest to the transformation community.
  • Moderation of posts for reasons not listed above are at the discretion of the Trusted Users who moderate this website, for the purpose of keeping things within the "spirit" of the owner's wishes and the website's purpose.
  • If you disagree with a moderation decision, please make an argument as to why it should be reinstated. Use the posting guidelines to justify your point. Do not attack the moderator.

[Edit this Page]