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From: guest (Blackdaw) , 86 months, post #1
Steamrolled and her wonderful comic have returned to Deviantart.

Just wanted to say, I love the angle with the recent strip. The two waitresses having their sexuality swapped with the perverted old man and boy is just a really hot idea. Would love to see more like it.

From: guest (leon) , 86 months, post #2
I agree, I love swaps that involve out of character behavior, even though if it's just a mental swap thing.

I also noticed someone with the name BlackDaw has added some chapters to a certain popular writing.com interactive. Could that be you by any chance?

From: guest (Blackdaw) , 86 months, post #3
Sometimes mental swaps are the best, I love it when the person finds out about the swap, but due to their new sexuality, are only more turned on by the revelation. It's great too when they have no idea what's happened to them, but happily live out their new lives.

And yeah, that's me working on I Know That Ghost! Hope you've liked it, let me know what you think! I don't know if I'm conveying some of these scenes and ideas well, so I'd love some feedback!

From: guest (leon) , 86 months, post #4
Honestly, I'm very much impressed with your writing. I liked your approach on the memory aspect; how Jezzer discovers his new memories, and that particular recalling of a previous encounter between the two was just great. I can't quite put my finger on what makes it different, but the discovery of his powers and how he experiments to find his limits was also fun to read. And the details about the car was surprising, you don't usually expect that level of characterization, and I think it adds a great deal to the story. This is the level I'd consider quality work. I hope you continue that path, I know a lot of people here would appreciate it. (Just look at the comments here to Frosty's contributions to that interactive. Perhaps you're actually using a different alias?)

My only criticism for that interactive was not allowing Jezzer to use his powers in more diverse situations, and stick to a small number of local characters. I should add that I love how that allows a more detailed characterization, and I get the argument that less is more, but to have him jump around different bodies and explore a bigger variety of identities they offer, and even engaging in that same ooc behavior, would be a lot more intriguing. This is just my opinion though.

In any case, I'll keep an eye out on where you take the story. Great work!

From: guest (Blackdaw) , 86 months, post #5
Thank you so much for your kind words! I've enjoyed writing it so far. I found that Frosty and JR didn't give as much attention to the mechanics of Jezzer's powers as they could have. It's something that I'm gonna enjoy exploring. The liquor store encounter between the two was fun to write, and I'm gonna try to come up with more examples where Jezzer gets to remember how much he disliked and lusted after Rebecca, as well as getting her side of the story. I'm glad i've gotten across the mind stuff well. As for the details, I find it's that kind of thing that lets a story breath, and showing Jezzer disrupt the family dynamic is sort of the point of the story I guess. Well I hope people do like it, as fucked up as it is. And no, I'm not Frosty, if that's what you're saying :P

As for the amount of characters I have in mind, I do plan on it being a bit of a slow expansion. I plan on using a few new characters, as well as some that are already constant within other threads within the story. I can almost guarantee I won't have Jezzer going to the mall and switching around a dozen times within a few chapters, those kinds of interactive are not quite as enjoyable for me. I'd like to see Jezzer become pretty intimate with a few women, using them at first to get to Tim but coming to appreciate them for the simple fact that they're fun to be.

In terms of 'diverse situations', what do you mean, though? I have a few ideas where he might jump into someone to help himself or Tim in some way, but those will probably be pretty minor circumstances, like getting a cop to let Rebecca out of a speeding ticket or something. For the most part, the possession action is gonna be centered around a number of busty babes, as those are Jezzer's favorite targets, as well as part of the reason I've started writing this stuff. It is a fetish, after all! Lol.

Thanks for the feedback!



From: guest (mad charles) , 86 months, post #6
Not sure how many noticed, but in the comments section of the newest page there is a preview of what may come in the future. http://sta.sh/0vjwjtqlrz3

Also, it looks like she is going to be making a patreon account which will have an intro comic.

From: guest (Blackdaw) , 86 months, post #7
Yeah I saw that. Interesting stuff, looks like she's having lots of fun with it.



From: guest , 86 months, post #8
Super hot. Hope we see more of those waitresses as well. I like her new art style a lot, you can tell she's been developing it.

From: guest , 86 months, post #9
I just read the addition to IKTG.... My god BlackDaw, it's so dirty... But so good....

From: guest (leon) , 86 months, post #10
@Blackdaw

The cop example is very much what I was thinking. I understand the argument that it can turn out to be a clutter of unrefined characters in and out the story, which would constantly shift focus, and that wouldn't be as exciting as exploring a character in a more comprehensive manner, like you seem to be doing. My issue was about how the focus stayed on the same characters for a long period of time where actually nothing significant happens, and past a certain point that makes the story and the characters themselves repetitive. I know some people actually prefer that repetitiveness, and it's not my cup of tea, but I get that. I have no issue with the family dynamic, as it's basically considered the gist of the story at this point. Just wishing to see a bit more variety, perhaps with other characters that would enrich the story, and not cause clutter as some authors have done to several interactives, which basically killed them imho. Minor encounters could be a perfect way to employ that. I'm not really a writer, so you may disregard that answer I gave too early in the morning in that other thread, about the ideas suggested. Basically, I wanted to see Jezzer explore more.

With what you said about the attention to the mechanics, and about your ideas, I don't think it's too early to say you seem to know exactly what you're doing. I'm hooked.

And I feel like I hijacked this thread, so here's a clickable link to the Steamrolled's deviantart stash:
http://sta.sh/0vjwjtqlrz3

From: guest (Guest) , 86 months, post #11
I started the thread on JohnG/JR verison of the story.

I was surprised when someone updated the story. It bothers me that I cant leave any comments on the chapters on Writing.com like you can in FM.

I honestly dont want to bombard this thread out of the original focus but im not sure if i should start a new thread.

First of all, I want to thank you for adding to the story. I think you did a remarkable job adding characterization with the detailed memory recalling.
I especially loved the taunting Jeezer does to Rebecca.

I can't wait to hear Jeezer's his inner monologue and taunts while impersonating Rebecca and etc. I especially want to see the conscious Rebecca trap in her own mind watching and Jeezer taunting her in her head as she slowly turns into Jeezer's main puppet.(Which you foreshadowed, really great job btw)

I think the memory recall can be done with less work. First two times were awesome but the I think you can ease up on the insignificant memories later by just giving the general outline of it. Unless its information that You deem worthy.(Its your story! Do whatever you want with it! :D) It can serve as a shortcut and avoid stress. I really dont want another writer burnt themselves out :(.

I understand Leon want diversity but in all honestly, it will take a lot of effort by one person and its just gonna be messy with the story being stagnated. So for me, I totally concure with your reasoning. I think switching settings can already avoid the stagnation, it leads to natural minor characters being introduced which in turn leads to more options. It only works in Jeezer's pov, cause Tim's pov is limited without Jeezer since Tim cant do anything lol.

The modifications alone can already keep the story interesting as it progress without the need for extra characters. The process should take some effort and time. Less so for the other 3 but Rebecca should take longer since Jeezer is decided she is going to be his new body.

im writing too much.. so last point! Sorry^^

I think i can give a suggestion on how the indoctrination works. Ive read in a book series where the villian can influence the victims in their mind by speaking in their own inner monologue and giving them suggestions in the characters thoughts. The more time Jeezer spent in one body, the more control he has. Its pretty cool in the book, the characters didnt realize her/his other inner voice was the villian the entire time. She thought it was his brother's teaching that left his voice inside her head as her instinct.

Once again, thanks for writing and hope to see more! I really enjoyed the recent chapters you added.








From: barackobrahma , 86 months, post #12
@Blackdaw
What they said before... and this:
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@guest #11
which book?

From: guest (Blackdaw) , 86 months, post #13
@Leon

Don't worry, I have a few character and little events in mind, it won't all be sex and smut. That being said, the majority of the focus will be on a few 'main' characters. I plan on taking a similar angle that JR and Frosty took, that is, not cutting a whole lot of time out of the story. While I'm not sure that I agree that the original thread was repetitive, I think I've taken a different spin. So I guess we'll see if it fits with what you're hoping for, can't promise anything though. I really like a lot of the characters already in the story, but there are a few others I'm gonna throw in there. Maybe they'll mix things up enough for you.

@guest11

I'm happy to chat about this story, you guys seem to have some neat ideas. I'm not game for everything that's thrown out of course, but it helps to talk about some of this. If you feel like making another thread, go for it.

Glad you like it. I'm getting a kick out writing Jezzer as so vulgur. It's hard to describe, but the way he is demeaning her is really erotic for me. Trying to think of ways to do it so as to not make it repetitive. That's messed up but hey, it's a story about a homeless guy possessing big-chested women...

Yeah I'm looking forward to finally getting him to perform as his new identity around other people, especially Tim and Heather. I think you're right, that will provide good opportunity for Jezzer to further insult her, I'm sure he'll be quite smug as he parades her around. As for this second point, I had a similar idea, but I'm now sure when and how I would introduce this mechanic. I feel like the pay off would be better if Jezzer simply had her forget most of the things he does while inside her body, to start with. That way I could play with her behaviour changing in subtle ways and not-so-subtle ways due to his influence at first, while she's totally unaware she's being manipulated. I don't know, the order of events is still a little murky for me.

As for the memory, I will partially agree, in that the memory scene in the masturbation chapter was a bit clunky. I knew that when I submitted the chapter, but there were a few pieces of info and characterization in there that I felt were still important enough to leave in. I think I'm going to avoid the memory thing in a scene involving any kind of action from now on, simply because it breaks the pace.

As for me 'burning out', well, this is literally the first time i've tried writing erotica. I won't promise that i'll add with anything near the frequency that Frosty and JR were doing at one point, but I would like to keep working on it.

Your points on diversity are pretty close to my intentions, I want things to go pretty slowly as opposed to chaotically. Though I do plan on switching to Tim's POV at some point soon, just so we can see at least a little bit of his own internal reaction to what's happening with his mother and soon, some of the other women around him.

I agree, seeing Jezzer directly manipulate Rebecca will make this quite a different story to the original thread I think. I'm not sure what other 3 you're referring to, though.

Actually I quite like reading what other people think about this story, i'm pretty new to this so hearing other ideas is quite helpful. Just don't be surprised when some variation of it appears in my work. I'm already going to borrow a few things from the main thread, but I don't think that's a problem, considering the nature of these interactive stories. Hopefully I make it original enough to be worth it.

This last idea is pretty cool, I like it a lot. I do think that something like this would be one of the steps that happens before the level discussed before, where Rebecca is forced to watch Jezzer manipulate her body. Having her less directly controlled by Jezzer, via him just sitting in the back of her brain, is definitely something I'd like to try. But again, the timeline is something I'm not set on. As of right now, I'm still getting over Jezzer's second orgasm :P

Thanks very much for the compliments and feedback. Nice to see that this community is welcoming, if a little odd.





From: guest (guest) , 86 months, post #14
@barackobrahma
There's no TG involved in the story. Nor strong focus on mind control.. well there is but it really isnt the point of the story and it doesnt even reveal or mentioned until the second and third book.
Its a great series though, if you are interested without the TG element.
It's called Mistborn, its first book premise is essentially a heist in a world where some people can ingest metal and burn it within their bodies. Different metals enhance or provide power to the users.


From: DocVS , 86 months, post #15
Hello everyone,

I just stumbled upon this thread and the praise Blackdaw has been receiving for his dark and rather enticingly depraved posts on the IKTG interactive tale on Writing.com. The conversation between everyone really piqued my interest, so I decided to go ahead and read Blackdaw's excerpt.

What else can I say but: WOW. I was thoroughly engrossed in all the sordid, multifaceted details that ol' Jezzer had experienced in his new persona of Rebecca Gately. Blackdaw basically wrote a wonderful narrative that covered practically most common aspects/themes inherent in a transgender-oriented possession tale, but also turned it on its head and around. It definitely made me rethink the whole possession idea (which is still my first love when it comes to a TG fictional universe, hence my own 1st love of stories involving bodyhoppers or spirithoppers).

And I guess I need to make special mention on the delightfully demented taunting scene/roleplay of Jezzer and "Rebecca", using a modality that is a part of my own "twisted" (hint hint) well being. Of course, that scene stood out the most to me. That is actually a rather unique and comprehensive excerpt where the voice swapping isn't just a plot device, but rather has a place as a newfound "power" or "ability" which both confuses Jezzer (at first) but then excites him in a way he never could have dreamed. Would Jezzer continue to utilize this in future installments? Only the talented Blackdaw can answer that question for me.

I will admit, as a captioner, some of my own work has involved a "dialogue" inside one body, but this certainly took it to a new and exciting level. It honestly has given me my own ideas and inspiration for future captions.

Finally, this is a message to not just Blackdaw but all the members of this thread, aka the "possession" lovers and lovers of a good "dark tale." It really is awesome that there is just this unique and accepting community of like-minded people who can suggest, argue, and critique this topic/interest. For me, it holds such a special place in my own mind, enough that I too would enjoy contributing to the discourse. It often gets busy in real life for me, so it becomes hard to be "in the moment", but honestly I never stop thinking about what more ideas I can do to further "enhance" or "twist" (yes I said it again) this little niche of a genre in TG fiction, whether through my captions or stories. Everyone here seems very approachable and I think could provide some great insight, or at least we can just chat about why we love TG possession-based stories and themes so much. If any of ya'll would like to just communicate via e-mail, I would sincerely welcome it - just another way all of us can show appreciation for a genre we have a common ground, love, and respect for.

Thanks!

DocVS
docvs2010@gmail.com

From: guest (leon) , 86 months, post #16
@everyone
Just wanted to notify you guys, Guest #11 has (quite rightly) moved the discussion about the interactive to the original IKTG thread, and I posted my ramblings over there:
https://metamorphose.org/thread/show.htp?threadid=20628&page=3&se0=thread&se1=show

From: guest (Morphan) , 86 months, post #17
Getting this discussion back on track about Steamrolled's update, of which there has been yet another page added to the "New girlfriend with ray gun" storyline. This one has two separate TG headswap bits in it. No doubt we're going to see more of the people affected as the whole point of the swaps is for Eve to study and write a paper about them. One notable inclusion to the storyline has Eve's uh... boyfriend, now being given a bracelet that allows him to perceive the changes too. Although only the ones Eve makes.

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