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From: guest (leon) , 90 months, post #21

I've always loved the shift in power or social status, and it was kind of a good deal to read a homeless guy taking over that character and using that new identity for whatever means.

I think pointing out a particular character can be redundant to your creativity, but as long as it involves a similar shift in its core, I think it'd be interesting no matter who gets these powers. From the top of my head though, I think it'd be nice to get more variety in terms of age, race (different backgrounds, cultures), workplaces (the shift in positions), wealth (having access to more, or even less), knowledge and skills (having access to different ones as they are possessing different characters, like suddenly becoming an expert on playing a musical instrument, or maybe sports) I know about the rule of "write what you know," but I think it'd be great to see different settings in which you run amok with your brilliant writing, and you've already won us over with how interesting you can make these scenarios.

In any case, it'd be awesome to read more of whatever you put out!

From: guest (guest) , 90 months, post #22

For the moment? I don't think having multiple people having powers is a good idea unless you are bored of the characters.
It puts extra stress and work for you to incorporate the second power character and might just burn you out. Although the idea of having one of jeezers friend to join in messing with the helpless protagonist is interesting. Plot wise, character like Jeezer would probably enjoy the prospect of sharing the power to someone similar to him so he can have more amusement of the situation.
I really enjoy what you are writing and I don't want us, the readers affect your enjoyment of writing by feeling obligated to cater the readers. You do you man!

Personally, similar to Leon. I also enjoy the shift in power and status especially so with someone with lower social status(like jeezer) abusing his power and getting his way by accessing the hosts kits and intellect. I think you guys were doing an excellent job writing the whole memory editing and impersonation.

From: guest (guest) , 90 months, post #23

Oh also, if I may. Reading your previous reply. You said the Randal plot line isn't exactly your full intentions, would making Jeezer seduce Randal by using someone close to Tim and purposely be caught by Tim to sever their friendship as a plot device to wrap that whole segment cleanly without the need of abandoning what you've already written?

From: guest (Frosty) , 90 months, post #24

I guess I should have been more specific. If I were to start writing for IKTG, It would likely be from an earlier point. I do like the original thread, but there are things that I think could have been done in a better, perhaps more nuanced or subtle way. I would likely use the same cast of characters, but with an outsider like Jezzer filling the role of the possessor, as opposed to somebody close to Tim like his mother.

I have to agree Leon, the more significant shifts are fun to play with, a shift in social status is a definite player. There's a head-swap story on writing.com that features a pair of african-american petty criminals head-swapping with a busty mother and daughter. "Body Part Swap 2: The Sequel", for anyone interested. I particularly like Jackhalf's contributions.

As for what you mention about the possessor taking on traits of the host, like aptitude in things like sports, that was something that we played with in the original thread. Cecilia is shown playing field hockey in one scene, performing well, and it's hinted at that it's actually Jezzer playing, simply using Cecilia's natural athleticism for his own amusement.

I guess, Leon, I'm interested in if you can spitball any ideas along your premise of shift in social status. Who else would be fun to have possessing Tim's family?

In response to post #22, I hadn't really planned on having more than one character having the powers. My question was more thinking along the lines of starting a new thread with a new antagonist character. I've played with Jezzer cloning his mind in other bodies in other threads, but that's probably as far as I'd go as far as "sharing" the power.

That's a fair premise on the Randal plot, but honestly it's something I'd like to redo. I'd rather make that part more comical than insidious.

Thanks for the comments!

From: guest (Ashu) , 90 months, post #25

I think the bully from Tim's school or his teacher would be great as possessors.

You can also play the change in social status card with them.

From: guest (Frosty) , 90 months, post #26

Oh the bully idea is really good, for some reason i'd not considered that. It would be interesting watching a bully's vengeance turn into some form of sexual taunting, which turns into actual attraction. Perhaps the bully starts out only attracted to his new form as well as his new 'daughter', but then slowly finds that his want to torture Tim evolves into a screwed up kind of attraction.

I'd love to hear ideas about the character, or other thoughts.

From: guest (etim) , 90 months, post #27

I like how you can make the bully idea work, it can be interesting.
I thought that maybe he bullies Tim because he envies him, he envies Tim's family, when instead his family mistreats him and ignores him, maybe the same thing happens in school where Tim has friends while he is alone and ignored becouse he's ugly. He just wants someone cares about him and that Tim notices him.

From: guest (Frosty) , 90 months, post #28

That's pretty good. Would make 'killing off' the bully's physical body a little easier.

Would be super fucked up, lol.

From: guest (Bob) , 90 months, post #29

Can't wait to see what you come up with.

From: barackobrahma , 90 months, post #30

I was thinking about something ever crazier... Tim having a split personality who has the power. Maybe he can use the power in some circumstances... but have to deal with his split persona wrongdoings.

From: guest (leon) , 90 months, post #31

Sorry for the late reply. I know the story you're talking about, and I think it's surprisingly well done. The scenes whereClick to show spoiler
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Okay, people seem to like the bully idea and I can see it working as it's already been done before in the "Ding!" story over at literotica. It might be interesting to see how much further you can take the story than that one, as that one kinda stops abruptly.

But I have to ask, why limit your story to a single household? I've always had trouble understanding why it had to be kept contained. I mean, I loved it when the school and the Cecilia was involved, and I just kept thinking why not go further?

As far as spitballing goes, here are some ideas, but I should apologize as I haven't actually given much thought into it so it all might sound stupid:
Have the possessor realize their power through a mild non-tg possession without getting too much into it (like Tim's friend.) Have them reveal their ability to Tim through possession of a local host or a celebrity on a live TV show or a newscast, and have the character display some out-of-character behavior that clues Tim into it, as he's watching the broadcast. (Or take the story to a streaming channel if you want to push the gamer aspect.) Have a regular visit to the local bank turn into a "clerical error" by someone working at the bank (that cute teller/manager maybe?) that has Tim end up with a much bigger account. And then, wanting to spend his money, he can visit the local mall, but he can get "forcibly" sidetracked into a clothing store in which that attractive salesperson gets possessed into trying different clothes, messing with Tim's mind ("This' my size? *wink*") As he's "persuaded" to pay for the items, he realizes all the money from his account is taken away, reality being as it is, but wait, the cashier can get "possessed" into letting Tim leave the store with the items, but whoops, now the alarm is going. Now he has to deal with mall security, and after that, along with several other minor offenses (that somehow puts Tim in a compromising position, like complaints about how some people can't remember what they've "done some questionable things" and somehow it happens when Tim's around) along with some media coverage, this can tip off the local police and get Tim in their radar. Now he has to deal with an investigation, or even a criminal record he actually has no part in creating, but only the possessor knows the truth, and he's in his or her mercy. All this time he's been manipulated and he likes it. He can't go back to his old life again, even if he wanted to. (You can go even further with an "interesting" court scenario, lawyers, judges, jurors all over getting possessed and messing with Tim during the hearings, etc.)

All of this is just me tired and rambling, but I really don't think I need to tell you how you can make any of these scenarios "interesting" as I've said, we all know. I just like to see some variety and creativity as opposed to rehashing old stuff over and over again, but maybe that's just me. If you want to talk about what other directions the characters or the story can go (or about ideas that're actually given some thought), I'd be happy to help.

And I think barackobrahma's idea has much more potential.

From: guest (Guest) , 90 months, post #32

I always thought the occupation of the possessed victim is an interesting direction, especially an occupation with power like law enforcement or upper management/CEO.
I mean it would only make sense for a single mother to have that much free time and income to support three children. It provides more for Jeezer to mess with Tim by telling him what he did at her job.

It would interesting if a cop came around asking questions about the corpse dumping. She happened to be extremely attractive giving another excuse for Jeezer to hop in and scare the shit out of Tim.

Regardless of you decide to continue the story or not. Its been fun spitballing like this, I'm sorry if my ideas leans on the darker side but
Ive always drawn towards the darker stories like the whole Escape story by sammig82.

From: guest (razor) , 90 months, post #33

Hi JohnG (or Frosty, whichever you prefer :D) and JR,

I recently read the interactive, it's been awhile since I read a possession story with very interesting 'scenes' while also maintaining a nice storyline and solid character building :) I have to say that I really enjoy reading the chapters.

I have a suggestion, if you guys ever decides to continue the Jezzer arc or writing it from beginning, can you write more from Heather's (or other victim involved) POV after the possesser leaves them ? I really likes the way you guys delivered the story from two victim's perspective, it makes me really connected with the character and also makes the overall story more interesting.

And another suggestion, I think the possessor is having too much control over the situation. While sometimes it's really fun, it might be a good idea to give some 'problems' that makes the possessor panicked once in awhile. This panic can be very hilarious and makes thing more messed up ! :D

Anyway, keep up the wonderful stories and I'm looking forward to whatever you guys write :D

From: guest (Zild) , 90 months, post #34

If you don't mind, can you make stories from the beginning of Jezzer or Jimmy arc and make Jezzer or Jimmy prefer stay in Heather's body more often than Rebecca, but don't make Tim knows about the ability too early.

Thank you in advance :D

From: guest (Grateful) , 90 months, post #35

Hey Frosty!

Just wanted to stop by and say that your Jezzer story had a HUGE influence on the way I approach TG literature. It was such a unique and interesting idea and I hope you don't mind but I often appropriate it in my Roleplays on Omegle! It was so fantastically written, so from a grateful fan, thank you.

From: guest (Frosty) , 89 months, post #36

Hey guys, sorry for the late reply. Tis' a busy time of the year.

I like the split personality idea Barrack, it would be interesting to implement.

Leon, to answer your first question... Limiting to one household at first simply allows for easier build up with less congestion. There was already quite the cast to involve, so taking things slowly was just more natural. I felt that there was a pretty good balance of school scenes, and it was building up to other plots as well. And besides, i just prefer keeping to male action centered around the main character.

Your spitballing is quite interesting, but it's not quite what I had in mind.

Guest32, we didn't really address the mother's job for simplicity sake. The idea I had in my mind was simply that the father is off somewhere paying huge child support as part of the deal he and Rebecca made in the divorce. As long as she raises the kids, he's willing to pay the bills and all the good stuff, which allows her to do the whole single mom and stay at home mom thing all at once. That being said, putting Jezzer or another character in a high up position as you say could be very interesting.

The cop idea is neat, I'd had a similar thought. The corpse was certainly going to come up as gossip around the school but that was all I had concreted. The dark ideas are fine, messing around with people is part of the kink.

Thanks for reading and enjoying, Razor. I had certainly planned on more POV time from Jezzer and the women in the new thread. Really, it's just choosing where to branch off from this point that I need to figure out but I've got a few similar ideas.

As for how much control the possessor has, it's something I'm willing to play with. I think a neat way to do it would have Jezzer refine his powers as time goes on, exacting more control. Did you happen to have any specific thoughts on this, though?

Zild, I'll keep your suggestion in mind. Rebecca is sort of a favorite focus in the story, I must admit, but Heather will definitely get some air time. And I had also planned on keeping Jezzer's identity secret for at least a little longer than most of the other branches.

And Grateful, I'm glad you liked the writing so much. I have to ask, what about the arc did you find so "unique and interesting"? I'm always looking for feedback. And I don't mind at all, considering Jezzer and Tim are not even my original characters, they were created by Donorface, JR and I merely created a bit of a crazy story from what was already there. Regardless, I'm glad you liked how it was written. I must also ask, in what ways are you using the writing in your roleplays? I'm interested to know. You're very welcome.

Thanks for the messages, if I didn't address something directly it's probably because I'm doing this off my phone. As I said this is a pretty busy time of year but I am thinking about ways to go about a new arc. I enjoy the suggestions, so keep em' coming if you guys have them.

From: guest (Frosty) , 89 months, post #37

Another note. What do you guys think of cloning in this story? There are a couple shorter arcs I've added to there where Jezzer cloned his mind into other bodies. I love it , but yet again it's something that I want to implement in the best way. Again any thoughts would be appreciated.

From: guest (guest32) , 89 months, post #38

I think you already established a good foundation for cloning. Cloning should require consistent durations of possession. That would create a limition to his powers, so he couldn't just instantly copy and paste himself. Current candidates would be Rebecca and Heather. Trish is slowly meeting the requirement.

It's not technically "cloning" if he just modify the host to the point of a second self. I feel like clones shouldnt be as balant at first and only Jeezer would know about it. Even if it's revealed, it will be harder to detect since there's no signs possession like eye colours.

There's too many stories with cloning that just traps the writers into writing the same character in different bodies.

From: guest (Ashu) , 89 months, post #39

IMHO Cloning gives way too much power to the possessor, I mean he can get pretty much out of any situation with cloning and where's the fun in that? ;)

From: guest (razor) , 89 months, post #40

How about making Jezzer's mind-bending ability randomly changes everytime he possesses a new victim ? So when he leaves the host body and possessing some more, he slowly loses the mark he left on his former hosts. You can make the victim slowly recover, or making the bad effect even worse.

Also, giving the possesser a weak spot might be a good idea. For example, you can make his powers won't work if he's near an object (crucifix, maybe ?), hopping to another body only by physical contact so his mobility is hindered, or a magic/mana power concept so he has to fill it up with a potion or something (a lot of sex sounds good) to be able to use his powers. This will be more fun if neither Tim nor Jezzer realized those things.

Good luck with your work in RL and looking forward to your stories ! :)

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