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From: guest (Kara)
, 121 months, post #261 |
Same here! Love to see a few masking comics for a change.
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From: guest (champo)
, 121 months, post #262 |
Will he post his older stuff? I've been waiting over a year now.
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From: Alias
, 121 months, post #263 |
Simple Simon page 2 is up.
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Simple-Simon-Page-2-450863646
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From: guest (Goaleo)
, 121 months, post #264 |
Page 3 of Simple Simon is up:
http://chronicstuss.deviantart.com/art/Simple-Simon-Page-3-451700495
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From: rugal
, 121 months, post #265 |
I'll be honest, I'm not quite a fan of this artist. The faces are
far too detailed and "real" to the point where it takes me a bit
out of the story. There's also the fact that, at least once a page,
there's a point where the visual flow of the page is screwed up and
you're intended to read a panel that obviously shouldn't be read
yet.
Take this page for instance: you should go from the top panel, to
the top left, top right, bottom left, bottom right and then the
tall panel would be the last one. But the way the balloons and
stuff go, you're intended to read 1, 2, 3, 6, 4, 5 which completely
disrupts the flow.
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From: guest (TRD)
, 121 months, post #266 |
some minor things like the panel flow might be improvable. i do
like the realistic drawing style though. very high quality!
professional stuff!
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From: guest (Kara)
, 121 months, post #267 |
I like the art. The expressions are very realistic and not
exaggerated at all. It's not "stylized" or "noir" or "cartoony".
However, the artist clearly doesn't understand panel layout or
storyboarding. They're really good with posing and facial
expressions but not with action sequences. Not a trained comic
artist but very good nonetheless .
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From: Alias
, 121 months, post #268 |
Simple Simon, Page 4 is up.
http://chronicstuss.deviantart.com/art/Simple-Simon-Page-4-452392356
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From: guest (Kara)
, 121 months, post #269 |
Page 5 is up!
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From: guest (Kara)
, 121 months, post #270 |
Possession now. Looks like we're going for all the TG tropes. I'm
sure we'll see shapeshifting by the end.
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From: fanjustthe
, 121 months, post #271 |
ma that was cool
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From: guest (youdontwannaknow)
, 120 months, post #272 |
If its to real it means they can draw, its amusing you mock a
person for there talent, critics are like arseholes everyone has
one, please don't see this as slander an arsehole is the hole in
your arse , I never mock crap artists, they might get good one day
but they won't if they get crap from it, people do things out of
encouragement not crap, but your actuily crapping on the best tg
artist in the world, who doesn't charge.......... if they charged
you would pay so shut it.
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From: guest (gwenstacey)
, 120 months, post #273 |
Wow, what a fantastic 11 pages. The art is amazing and the story
sexy and fun.
My only suggestion is an alternate ending page with a more devious
ending. However, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Great work
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From: guest (Gypsy)
, 120 months, post #274 |
I would really like to see something where some unsuspecting
uninterested in body swapping guy gets placed into a really good
looking woman and has to deal with it without any interest in being
in a woman's body
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From: guest (Kara)
, 120 months, post #275 |
Page 6 is up.
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From: kennedy
, 120 months, post #276 |
Links to pages 5 and 6.
http://chronicstuss.deviantart.com/art/Simple-Simon-Page-5-453242310
http://chronicstuss.deviantart.com/art/Simple-Simon-Page-6-454221062
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From: Random
, 120 months, post #277 |
Page 7 is up.
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From: guest
, 120 months, post #278 |
Awesome art work, the story line kind of stinks- boring and
unoriginal
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From: guest (Kara)
, 120 months, post #279 |
Not trying to critcize the writing on this but the reveal on the
latest page was reaaaaaly cheesey. Maybe intentionally? Spies and
assassins aren't stupid enough to put their names on their weapons
and "James the Bodyswapper" is just a silly thing to put on the
label. Maybe if the label said "James Frobish" or something and the
hero recognized the name and said "The Bodyswapp er?". It just
seemed so forced...but don't stop writing, CS!
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From: guest (CopyKen)
, 120 months, post #280 |
Page 8 is up :)
http://chronicstuss.deviantart.com/art/Simple-Simon-Page-8-455834226
I have to say, the talk of this Comic has gotten interesting :]
@Kara
I laughed kinda hard when I saw what You posted here (reaaaaaly
cheesey,) and went back to actually read page 7 again. It was
pretty bad (the reveal.) That is true, no "Bad Guy" would put that
on their stuff unless their ego seriously gets in the way lol. I
side with you with the idea you had. I talked to CS a little while
back and I think this is supposed to be Cheesy and Funny. He said
after the last Comic (The Cabin,) he needed to lighten the Mood for
us all. It does have it's Pros though. The Art is Incredible (in My
Opinion,) The Women are drawn Beautifully, I am itching to see
what's the deal with Prince, if Simon is actually a Bad A** Agent
or is just getting lucky, and finally it's got TG Tropes for us
all, as you stated ;)
Either way, love your honest but kind criticism on things XD
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